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One of the most challenging things for fifth-graders is to begin to develop their sense of logical thinking. By logical thinking, I mean their ability to build an argument. In order to build an effective argument, we have to create reasons and then support those reasons with evidence. I tell the students that it's like a pyramid with the claim on the top, the reasons on the second layer, and the evidence at the bottom supporting the reasons. Somehow the effective linking of a claim with the word because with a reason is extremely difficult for elementary students--sometimes it's difficult for adults, as well. I once heard someone say that because is one of the most misused words in the English language, and I didn't understand what she meant at first. However, now that I study how children learn to construct arguments and how hard it is to teach effective arguing, I understand how the meaning and use of the word because is a challenging concept.
Today, I guest-taught in a fifth-grade classroom, and they were preparing for a debate about whether or not their school should serve chocolate milk. This has become a popular debate in workshop-oriented classrooms because it is at the core of Teachers' College fifth grade argument curriculum.
I made a chart to try to guide the students into thinking within categories of reasons, as opposed to lists of evidence. An important differentiation to make with students is the difference between why, what, and how. When we answer the question of why, we are usually in the land of reasons. I called these why questions, and I taught the students that the answers to these types of questions go with the word because.
I tried to even develop a formula for them to use to test their reason. If their claim couldn't connect with the word because to their reason, then chances were high that what they thought was a reason was actually evidence. One girl understood that I meant when I wrote the following "equation" for her:
CLAIM + BECAUSE+ AN EXPLANATION= A REASON
Evidence is important, and I kept that clear as I worked my way through this chart. Sometimes evidence can even work as a reason. For example, in the above chart, the fact that chocolate milk can cause heart disease could work as a reason if the arguer wanted to keep saying more about heart disease, and it could also work as evidence if it is supporting the idea that chocolate milk should be banned because it causes health problems. The important distinction is that evidence answers the questions what or how.
During the half hour of work time the students had, they began to sort their information in much more meaningful ways, thinking about how the puzzle of reasons and evidence could all fit together to support their claim. Arguing and logic are such important skills, and it's fun to watch students begin to understand the power of a strong argument.
Happy Slicing,
I love how you are teasing about the reasoning behind the equation. I think when equations are just presented without the thinking behind them or better yet the students constructing them, they become rote and misused. The way you have presented this scaffold - it becomes a "pop-up" menu of options in their mind to guide them. Thank you for sharing your process.
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I love how you are teasing about the reasoning behind the equation. I think when equations are just presented without the thinking behind them or better yet the students constructing them, they become rote and misused. The way you have presented this scaffold - it becomes a "pop-up" menu of options in their mind to guide them. Thank you for sharing your process.
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Another wise post, Melanie - and I am, as always, awed by the fierce intentionality in all you do. Saving this for our next unit - argument writing.
ReplyDeleteAnother wise post, Melanie - and I am, as always, awed by the fierce intentionality in all you do. Saving this for our next unit - argument writing.
ReplyDeleteI am with you on this one! It is hard thinking. Divining the difference between reason and evidence is a struggle for my 5th graders. Your thinking about the word because is brilliant. We don't use the word properly.
ReplyDeleteThinking about science experiments and their results helped me break it down with some kids. Scientists see the results of an action and can write about the evidence or results. But the reason for or the cause of the results/evidence is where the higher level thinking and problem solving exists. Sometimes it helps me when students look at the data first and then find the reasons for. Tough thinking no matter how we approach it!
We have been having all kinds of conversations on persuasion vs. argument. It is a fine line, but I think your explanation on evidence & reasons helps clarify some of this.
ReplyDeleteThe time it takes to truly break down the language, expectations, and understandings attached to each standard is work every teacher in America who is expected to teach Common Core should be allowed to do! It is so powerful! I will be sure to pass this along to my grade 5 teachers!
ReplyDeleteCrystal clear, Melanie! Thanks so much for explaining that "why" = reasons!! !
ReplyDeleteCrystal clear, Melanie! Thanks so much for explaining that "why" = reasons!! !
ReplyDeleteThis post pushed my thinking in just the direction it needed to go! Thank you for sharing!
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